Sequence and Storyline

Our storyline is simple as we are only doing a opening sequence.
It will start with lewis in a class room writing on a piece of paper, on the piece of paper it will have a list of names and he will be writing over them over and over. Then he will underline the name 'Lily Conchie' asif it is the victim. After this it will then go onto the character of Lily Conchie as she is sat in the canteen, this then introduces the character making it understandable and then the viewer can realise that this is her. After this we will see a view of lily just sitting chatting with friends. Then her phone will ring and it will be from an unknown caller, the phone is answered and it goes back onto her looking confused as to who has phoned her. Then we will see her getting up to go to a class, lewis will follow her on her journey. Once she has gone down a corridor she will reach where she wants to be, then she will go into the room. We will then see lewis following her down the corridor and approaching the room. Then we will see lewis go into the room lock the door then there will be an immediate close up of his eyes creating suspense as the viewer does not know what will happen after as it is only an opening scene, we aim to create tention and make the viewer question what is going to happen next?

Lily Conchie